“You've successfully identified a problem, but your solution, business model, and execution are all trash.”
Story & Problem
4.0The 'Fear of Disappointment' as your core problem statement is so abstract it makes me fear for your business model. You showed a lot of trash, but not *whose* pain you're actually solving.
Market Size
3.0'140 crore people' is a population count, not a market opportunity. I need a dollar figure for what you're trying to capture, not just how many eyeballs could theoretically see trash.
Business Model
0.0You claim to 'Meet the Cure,' but I'm still waiting to 'Meet the Revenue.' Are you hoping for a GoFundMe for clean streets, or is the plan to monetize good intentions?
Team
2.0'Meet Pranay' is a great start for a LinkedIn profile. For a pitch deck, I need to know why this specific Pranay isn't just another dude who 'does nothing about it.'
Traction & GTM
1.0'Total Reports: 16' with 'Resolved Reports: 0'? That's not traction; that's a hobby. Your Go-To-Market strategy seems to be 'hope someone else cleans it up.'
Design & Clarity
5.0The slides are visually clean, which is great for readability, but the inconsistent naming ('TrashCam' vs 'UrbanEco') and nonsensical problem statement mean I'm visually pleased but mentally lost.
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