“You want to teach a billion kids, but your deck barely teaches me what you actually do.”
Story & Problem
5.0A mission to 'teach a billion kids STEM skills' is ambitious, but 'The Power of One Experience' is so vague it could be a self-help book, not a problem statement.
Market Size
3.0Your '$4 Billion Mobile E-Learning Market' from McKinsey is about as specific as saying 'humans breathe air.' It doesn't tell me anything about *your* segment, especially when you're aiming for a billion kids.
Business Model
4.0A '$9.99 per month subscription' is clear, but are parents paying for videos of kids doing oil and water experiments, or actual, scalable STEM experiences? Because YouTube is free, and Crisco is cheap.
Team
6.0Your resumes are certainly shiny, with JPMorgan and HBO sprinkled in, but I'm looking for 'built a global STEM empire,' not just impressive corporate and academic accolades.
Traction & GTM
2.0Your 'Go-To-Market Strategy' is a collage of other people's YouTube channels and follower counts. Showing me 'Baking With Ryan' isn't traction; it's a mood board for what you *wish* you had.
Design & Clarity
5.0The deck is visually clean, but the 'Vision' slide looks like you rented a TV studio for a corporate photoshoot. And the 'Circa 1988' photo is cute, but not quite 'series A ready.'
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