“You've got a killer team and real customers, but your market analysis is as structured as a toddler's diet plan.”
Story & Problem
7.0You've identified a real problem that makes my accountants cry, but 'LLMs can't reliably do maths' isn't exactly a groundbreaking discovery; it's a Tuesday for anyone who's actually tried to use them for anything serious.
Market Size
3.0Your $14.5B market size calculation is off by a decimal place or two, or maybe you just divided by 'vibes.' Showing a $100B+ market for the 'full application stack' without any actual market mapping makes me think you're confusing ambition with delusion.
Business Model
6.0Targeting 80%+ margin is a nice aspiration, but your unit economics are based on a 'per page' model; are you sure you won't just hit a wall when customers realize the costs for their piles of ancient PDFs?
Team
9.0Your team's LinkedIn profiles are probably more impressive than this deck, which is saying something. Good to see you all escaped the corporate grind to chase your own dreams, or at least a bigger equity cheque.
Traction & GTM
4.0You’ve got some decent traction saving companies actual time and money, which is rare for a deck like this. But your GTM strategy reads like a list of things my intern brainstormed; 'Founder-led sales' isn't a strategy, it's a desperation play.
Design & Clarity
7.0The design is clean, which is good because it leaves more white space for me to doodle better market numbers. At least I can read your vague statements without squinting.
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