“This isn't a pitch deck; it's a syllabus. Did you even read the invite, or did you just attach the nearest PDF?”
Story & Problem
1.0Your 'problem' seems to be that I don't have a PhD in functionalist anthropology. This deck reads less like a pitch for a scalable business and more like a syllabus for a very niche seminar at DTU.
Market Size
0.0The only market you've sized here is the number of students enrolled in '42620 Science, Technology & Society'. I'm not sure how many VCs are lining up to invest in a compulsory course.
Business Model
0.0Your business model appears to be 'educating students on the cultural theory of risk'. While noble, my LPs tend to prefer 'revenue' and 'profit' over 'academic discourse'.
Team
2.0Anders Kristian Munk seems like a very qualified academic for a 'Science, Technology & Society' course, but I'm looking for a founder who can actually build a product, not just present theories on 'problem wickedness'.
Traction & GTM
0.0The only 'traction' I see here is the rocket launching on slide 2, and that's not even *your* rocket. Your Go-to-Market strategy appears to be... teaching a class.
Design & Clarity
4.0The design is consistent for a DTU lecture, but for a pitch deck, it's about as clear as an 'unknown unknown.' I need to understand your business, not the grid/group model in 20 slides.
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