“You're selling picks and shovels for AGI, but your current revenue barely covers the cost of the shovels. Come back when AGI has its own Series A.”
Story & Problem
4.0Your problem statement about centralized data centers is fine, but the leap to 'achieve AGI' with consumer-owned hardware is so audacious it feels like you're trying to skip a few hundred funding rounds. Focus on a problem your little box can actually solve today.
Market Size
5.0A $7.11 trillion TAM for 2030 is less a market size and more a list of every industry you can vaguely touch. I'm sure every company wants a slice of 'AGI' too; how about we talk about the market your actual product addresses in the next 18 months?
Business Model
5.0Selling hardware with a 26% net margin for the '1st batch' is a glorified hobby, not a venture-scale business. And 50% gross for B2B IaaS is lovely, but you need a lot more than $120K ARR to prove you can actually deliver it.
Team
9.0Your team is stacked with founders and a CTO who probably coded the internet's first 'Hello World!' Your advisors are literally the legends. It's almost enough to distract me from the fact that this pitch isn't quite at their level.
Traction & GTM
4.0You've got $300k in pre-sales and $120k ARR? That's adorable. For a company aiming to 'achieve AGI,' this traction screams 'side project' more than 'future of compute.' Show me some real customers who aren't just your aunt.
Design & Clarity
6.0The dark, neon aesthetic is cool, like a Tron fan's dream office. But presenting a 'LINK DEMO' as a static image of a play button is a rookie mistake; it's good you included it, but I need to actually see it work.
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