“You've gamified the pitch deck, but the only game I see is 'Spot the Actual Traction.'”
Story & Problem
5.0Your problem statement includes a typo that perfectly sums up the 'pour' quality of your identified issues; 'lack of impact' is not a problem, it's a symptom of a show no one wants to watch.
Market Size
3.0Claiming 'no direct competition' in a €192 billion market is venture capitalist kryptonite; your Venn diagram just looks like two big circles of money you hope to catch, not a defined opportunity.
Business Model
4.0You've got more monetization methods than a Vegas casino, but 'Gems Packages' for TV series and 'Deep Fake coming soon' for brands sounds like a chaotic, undefendable mess, not a coherent business strategy.
Team
6.0Your team has decent titles, but I'm not sure if your CFO moonlighting in brand sales or your CTO also being the 'Game Designer' means you're lean or just stretching people too thin.
Traction & GTM
2.0Your 'Alpha Test of December 2024' is either from a time machine or wishful thinking, and 57 paying users isn't 'proven traction,' it's a rounding error for a serious entertainment platform.
Design & Clarity
5.0The consistent blue background is soothing, but the text-heavy slides and incomprehensible flowcharts are a nightmare; my eyes are still trying to 'untangle' your market slide.
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