“Your pitch feels like an unfinished beta: some cool tech, but the business model and traction are still in 'scoped and scheduled' purgatory.”
Story & Problem
5.0'Agentic payments,' 'agent-native,' 'agentic economy'—I get it, you've got a dictionary. While you've identified a real problem with 'oversight,' your 'Why Us' slide basically says you're good at finance... shocking for a FinTech startup.
Market Size
3.0Your 'Agentic Finance Market Map' looks like my five-year-old drew it after too much caffeine; it's unreadable and doesn't clarify your place. And '$1.8B' for SOM, based on a few numbers, feels less like market sizing and more like wishful thinking.
Business Model
4.0You've got an ACV of $350k, which is a number, I guess. But for a 'security gateway,' you completely forgot to tell us *how* you plan to make money—are we just supposed to assume it's magic?
Team
7.0Your team actually has relevant experience with ZKP and scaling to 70M customers, which is a refreshing change from 'two friends who watched The Social Network once.' Shame you couldn't apply that clarity to the rest of the deck.
Traction & GTM
2.0'1 Paid Pilot scoped + scheduled' and then a Q1 2026 goal for '1 paid enterprise pilot'? Is this a time-travel startup, or are you just recycling your wish list as traction? Accelerators are for learning, not for convincing me you're a market leader.
Design & Clarity
5.0You've clearly discovered a dark background with white text, which is nice. Your product screenshots are surprisingly clear, but that 'Market Map' on page 9 is a cluttered mess that gives me a headache just looking at it.
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