You've eloquently painted a picture of patient suffering, which is great, but 'AI Health Companion' is the startup equivalent of 'thoughts and prayers' – common and rarely impactful on its own.

You've got nested circles of market opportunity, which is adorable, but your $480M 'Lyme wedge' is smaller than my coffee budget, and you’re launching in 2026 – by then, that wedge might be a crumb.

The 'App available for pre-orders... FREE' is the clearest statement of your business model I could find. Are we funding a charity or a company? Because 'details in data room' doesn't usually mean 'we'll figure it out later'.

Alright, a Google exec and an MD/MBA, plus a real Lyme patient on the advisory – this is probably the only slide that doesn't make me want to invest in a different industry. Don't mess this up.

You've got 'partnerships' for 'access to 11k patients,' which is great... for 2026. Right now, your traction is 'pre-orders for an app launching after the next presidential election'.

The deck looks clean, probably thanks to that Google design background. But clarity on your actual *business* is still in the 'data room,' which is VC-speak for 'we haven't figured it out yet'.