“You've got a great story and a decent team, but your 'traction' is as elusive as a profitable D2C wedge, and your market sizing is pure fantasy.”
Story & Problem
8.0Your clawdbot losing money to Alex Hormozi is relatable, but most of our LPs are still trying to figure out what an 'agentic payment' even is. You've convinced me there's a problem, but can you convince the average bank VP?
Market Size
4.0Your TAM is so inflated it's practically in orbit; $10T for AI agent e-commerce spend isn't your addressable security market, it's just the revenue stream you're hoping to skim a fraction off. Get real.
Business Model
6.0Your enterprise pricing is clear, which is good, but your D2C 'wedge' seems to be driving into a completely different market. How do 150K free users translate into a $200K ACV deal, or are we just hoping they'll tell their bank?
Team
8.0Your team actually has relevant experience in identity and ZKP, which is a rare sight around here. Just make sure those 70M customers weren't using your service to buy Alex Hormozi masterminds.
Traction & GTM
2.0You claim '150K+ OpenClaw users' as your D2C wedge, then your traction slide shows '1 pilot scoped + scheduled' and two incubators. That's not a wedge; that's a plank in the eye of your credibility. Where are those 150K users?
Design & Clarity
7.0The design is clean and easy on the eyes, a pleasant break from the usual Comic Sans disasters. If only the clarity of your traction matched the clarity of your slides.
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