Your pitch spends more time on lettuce yields than on the actual agony of growers. Are we solving a deep pain or just offering a slightly better sprinkler system?

You've got a $30bn market, fantastic. Now tell me how you're going to grab more than a crumb when your 'large-scale sales' aren't even unlocked yet.

A license-focused business model relies on partners finding *your* value, not just *any* solution. Where's the proof they'll prioritize you over their own established margins, and at scale?

You expect me to invest millions, but you can't spare a slide to tell me who's actually running this show? Are you a team or an anonymous collective of plant enthusiasts?

You claim 'large-scale sales not quite unlocked yet' on one slide, then present a rosy pipeline on the next. Which version of reality am I investing in, the hopeful one or the honest one?

It's aesthetically pleasing, but your 'Acquisitions' slide implies you're buying up partners, which is confusing given your licensing model. Are you a consolidator or a technology provider?