You managed to articulate a problem that actually sounds like a problem, not just a 'gap in the market' – a rare feat. Apparently, telling VCs your life is hard is usually just whining.

Your 'SOM' is just your projected revenue, not an actual serviceable market. If I wanted to see your internal sales targets, I'd ask for them directly, not disguised as market analysis.

High ACV and sticky contracts? Sounds like you learned something from the grown-ups. Just make sure the 'AI-driven magic' actually drives value, not just fancy buzzwords.

Okay, a genuine industry insider paired with a technical lead who actually built something. It's almost like you two know what you're doing. Almost.

You've got some big names in the pipeline and a live customer. That's good, but your £175M ARR projection by 2030 off a £1.1M raise is either genius or a typo.

The deck is clean, easy to read, and doesn't make my eyes bleed – which is a higher compliment than you think. Now, if only the content was as consistently bulletproof as the visuals.