Your 'Vision Statement' sounds like a UN charter, not a pitch for a scalable business. You've identified a deep societal problem, but where's the part where *we* make money solving it?

You mention 'thousands of individuals' struggling for food. While admirable, that's a population count, not a market size I can invest in. Where's the TAM with dollar signs, not just sad faces?

Your 'Business Model' reads like a budget for a bake sale, not a company seeking venture capital. 'Reimbursed by the NGO' is an expense, not how you generate returns for *my* LPs.

The most important slide in any deck is missing. Are you a ghost? An AI? Without knowing *who* is behind this, it's impossible to invest. Even a shadow has a form.

You talk about 'on-ground surveys' and 'enrolling beneficiaries' but provide zero numbers. This isn't 'traction'; it's a grocery list. What have you *actually* achieved, quantitatively?

This deck looks like a ransom note written on an old typewriter. If you can't bother to make your pitch deck readable, why should I believe you can build anything valuable?