You jump straight to 'we are an AI Lending Tech company' like it's a dating profile. I'm looking for a problem that keeps people up at night, not your corporate identity; your 'story' needs less 'we' and more 'woe is me' from the customer.

You've given me a market *share* in a niche, but I still have no idea how big the overall market *pie* is in absolute terms. Is this a $1 billion market or a $10 billion market? I'm not here to play 'guess the TAM', especially when you're asking for money.

You've got two solid business lines, which is better than most. But your 'transformative AI SaaS' is still a small fraction of your P2P business; show me how that B2B tail is going to wag the dog, not just nibble at its heels.

Okay, I'll give you this: your team isn't a bunch of randos from a co-working space. You've got actual people from actual places; too many logos, though – I get it, you've seen the inside of a corporate high-rise before.

You've actually *done* things, which is a pleasant surprise. $2.2 billion in originations and leading your market in Korea means you're not just selling dreams; now, let's see if your global GTM isn't just a dartboard of countries.

Your design is like a perfectly beige office cubicle: functional, but utterly forgettable. And that executive summary? It's a textbook example of 'too much text, too little time' – make it snappy, I've got another 99 decks to ignore.