“You've built a whole ecosystem of buzzwords without a single human to run it, let alone sell a carbon credit.”
Story & Problem
5.0Your problem statement is trying to solve world hunger, climate change, and financial markets all at once. Pick a lane before you crash and burn trying to drive a truck, a tractor, and a rocket ship simultaneously.
Market Size
3.0"$4.7 trillion before 2030" is a great headline, but without any sense of *your* defensible wedge into it, it's just a Wikipedia factoid. Are you selling shovels in a gold rush, or just admiring the gold from afar?
Business Model
4.0Six revenue streams? That's not a business model; it's a spaghetti toss at a wall, hoping something sticks. And 'repaid with interest over 8 years while retaining full equity' sounds like you want our money without giving up *any* control or real upside.
Team
1.0You've got $150M of land and 'pre-approved' machines, but not a single human's name on this deck. Are you a sentient AI, or just shy?
Traction & GTM
2.0"Accumulated $150M of land" sounds impressive, but without a single customer, transaction, or even a named partner, it looks like you've got a lot of dirt and dreams. Your 'world's 1st' decentralized exchange is still just a design, right?
Design & Clarity
5.0Your slides are clean enough, but the sheer volume of buzzwords and conflicting messages makes me think you're trying to hide the fact that you don't actually have a clear story. I need a translator, not just a pitch deck.
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