You opened with a baby photo from 1988 to tell your story, which is... a choice. While adorable, it spent a whole slide saying nothing about the actual problem you're solving today for anyone besides your parents.

The market size slide gives a number ($4B mobile e-learning) that's far too generic for your specific offering and, frankly, laughably small for your 'teach a billion kids' mission statement. Are you sure you're not trying to boil the ocean in a teacup?

You stated a price point ($9.99/month), which is great, but after several slides, I still have no idea what kids actually *get* for that money. Is it just watching someone else spill oil on the counter, or do I get actual stuff?

Solid backgrounds on paper, but you've got two founders with impressive logos who somehow forgot to assign themselves actual roles or explain how film festival experience is critical to a STEM subscription product.

Your 'go-to-market' strategy seems to be hiring TikTok-famous bakers and Kanye West gospel flippers to teach STEM. Also, your 'traction' slide shows other people's subscriber counts, not yours. That's not traction; that's just a YouTube search history.

The design fluctuates wildly between a slick blue aesthetic and what looks like a series of hastily arranged screenshots and personal photos. And repeating the cover slide at the very end just shows you ran out of ideas, or forgot to delete a duplicate.