You've meticulously listed enough industrial problems to make my head spin, but a compelling story about *why Eave* is the only answer remains elusive. It's a problem statement, not a narrative hook.

Your TAM is suitably massive, but then you shrink to a minuscule SOM, and including your own 2030 revenue projection as a 'tailwind' is an amateur move. Are we projecting the market, or just your dreams?

A hardware-enabled SaaS model? Bold. You've successfully combined the capital intensity of manufacturing with the operational overhead of software. And 'data monetisation' is about as specific as my last LinkedIn connection request.

Finally, something solid. A Neuroscience PhD founder and a team with relevant experience in sales, engineering, and finance. You've assembled a surprisingly capable crew for this industrial tango.

Those logos are impressive, and the LTV:CAC is great, but then you show 'actuals' leading up to a 'Q4-2025 product launch.' Are we investing in historical data or a crystal ball for your *real* product?

The design is clean, but some slides are as text-dense as a legal brief. And that 'Eaveolution Ecosystem' diagram on page 4 looks like a spaghetti junction, making me question if your data is truly 'unified'.